Tutor Report for Assignment 5 – Contextual Studies and Refinements Made

I have attached below my tutor report for Assignment 5 - Contextual Studies. Overall this draft of the essay was much better received but there were some amendments suggested by my tutor to further improve the essay. I have since refined the essay based on my tutor's comments and I have recorded these edits below also.

Tutor Report for Assignment 4 – Contextual Studies

I received my tutor report back from my tutor for Assignment 4 - Contextual Studies. The tutor report is attached to this blog post. The feedback was very detailed and I also received an annotated essay further explaining my tutor's key points and issues regarding my first draft. Although my tutor felt I was tackling a topical issue, there were many areas he felt I could improve in.